You need to format your article in a way that makes it easy to read. You need titles and sub-titles. Right now, it is very difficult to read - to scan through quickly and organise information.

My method of reading is first to scan to build a general picture in my brain, and then to go back and read it so that I can quickly assimilate what is being said.

This is why magazines and newspapers use titles for all their articles. It makes reading much easier, and you won't lose the attention of those who are going through what you are saying.