ROTFLMAO. And rarely have I seen such a pretentious piece of supposed criticism from someone who has no ability to write whatsoever.
http://bestebookstories.blogspot.com/2012/09/flattering-words.html
I have a 4.53 rating on Goodreads amd several books that have 5 star ratings only, You are an absolute nobody who clearly got his knickers in a knot because he is one of those wannabes I was referring to. And deep down inside, he knows it.
'deslocated her should???" What is a should? Do you mean shoulder? And do learn to use capital letters. Nothing says 'wannabe' more than someone trying to be different.
Go back to kindergarden, little boy. And don't bother to give up your day job. You don't have the brains or the talent. Your writing is juvenile and lacks the rhythm that good writing requires.