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No. While everything is spelt correctly, you confuse verbs with nouns, and nouns with adjectives. In addition, the most basic sentences (your headlines) are written as a Chinese person looking up a word in a dictionary, and then not knowing which form of the word to use, and then using the incorrect one.

That is how I know this is not written in English. Even the most semiliterate person who is English speaking would find the way you use words to be bizarre.

I don’t believe you are English speaking, and your work, as is, is not publishable. It may be in your home language, but not in English.

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