If you want to be read and if your want your story circulated, you need to structure your article in a way that makes it easy to read. You also need to give your reader clues as to what it is about.

Sub-titles are there so that the reader can scan down to see if they want to read the article. Sub-titles tell your reader what that particular section entails. Your's are a mystery.

The result was that I didn't read them.